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Gallantry (Is That On I-70?)

Startled.
Martyred.
Mystical enchantments
On carvings with lack
Of existence and knowing
That time will rack

Days counted
Hours numbered
Who told us it was okay
To be
Dead.

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  • Remember3
    November 30, 2007
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    Makes you think.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 20, 2007

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    I like this .You have done a nice job with it thank you for sharing this with me.Goodluck to you in this contest.Best wishes and much love


  • look for tomorrow
    November 20, 2007
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    Interesting...