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why?

why did it have to be you?
why were you the one i loved?
why did you have to fall for someone else?
why?
why did you have to be the one?
Why i loved you so?
Why i cherished your heart and soul?
why?

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  • Diatribes
    November 23, 2007

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    I am made to wonder which is worse, the reasons that make it hurt, or the answers to why it hurts....


  • Gamool
    November 20, 2007

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    this is nice i could clearly relate to it, i like the way you wrote it in questions , its awesome
    great write!
    i like your work, ^.^


  • I will stand by you
    November 20, 2007
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    this is a great write. could captalize the I's though.