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Falling Downtown City Spectrum

There's a boy and a street sign
and a thousand downtown lights.

Everything I said was true.

Baby, you know that no matter
how hard I tried,
I never forgot that night.

Maybe it was the way the smoke
danced off our faces.
But for one place in time,
I felt like we understood each other.

It's not that we pretend to be happy,
it's that we don't pretend to laugh.
The half-hearted efforts
of talking things through
never met up to all the hype around it.

I never found that cigarette
that represented life.
I wanted to burn it out.

I think we should pretend for a while
and see if it manifests.
Maybe we can learn to smile.

Because we're standing here
just looking at the pavement.

I'm dancing around the words in my head.

I wonder how long
it will take
before we fall back to the stars.

Maybe you're gonna be the one that saves me.

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Oh no!

It's not enough just to be angry.

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  • Saint Gut-Free
    November 20, 2007

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    If I've understood this properly, then I'm done trying to save you, Ashleigh.
    Because all it gets me is this, and it leaves me burnt out and blacking out for no good reasons.

    One way or another, you're gonna kill me.