Is this the Laura I desire
whose naked splendor
draws my eyes
tempts my blood
to flow and urge to rise
Is this the woman
in my dreams
her smile arousing
midnight schemes
that spill to leave me
warm and wet
calm yet needing more
Is this the naked truth I feel
as her lips demand
and cosset me
sucks and calms
impatient urges
before my silent flow
converges
from head to head
hand to mouth
she swallows all I give
and leaves me there
to sleep
content I smile and dream
A contest entry
- Stimulate my mind !! take a peek its open canvas by Laura.
1300 points, ended December 9, 2007, 22 entries
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Ohhh very sensual! Beautifully written, and just enough spice!!
from head to head
hand to mouth
she swallows all I give
.. nice!
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Thank you
Many thanks for reading this one, I'm flattered.
Terry
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Whoo!
Lord! This is hot. Yet tasteful (no pun intended - well, maybe so).
I'm impressed!
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ohhh this isnt like a stalker thing is it? lolol
great poem though hey and yep i wish i were she in the pic shes lovely lolo
great poem with fantastic imagery way to go xxx -
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No stalking
No stalking here, it's long way for that but, you never know. The next time I fly home I could well be the one at your window. Don't forget to keep the curtains open a tad.
Thanks for the comments.
TC
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