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hours

Clocks count unhappiness
and mete moments of joy
spread upon layered lives in memory;

taking of sands by lower glass
is no less gentle
than the kiss given a lover,
or notes of windy flutes;

ends as beginnings,
flavors of air are not left to choose;
tastes 'pon tongues,
delights in eyes,
thoughts to taunt, teasing touches,
life's unwinding hours,
are ours alone.


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  • MariGoes gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    The tick tack of time
    Always pleasant when shared with someone we love. Always lonely when we have to stare at the hours, wishing for them to bring a smile that insists on staying away.
    For some reason, this seems to be one of my favourite of your recent poems.
    Mari


    • Peteskid gold member
      November 21, 2007

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      Thank you Mari

      sim, mas o sorriso e a felicidade
      é tão importante, faz o melhor de nosso tempo...
      it is always wonderful to hear from you...PK