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Reggae Heaven


Tonight I need a flight to Jamaica
The heaven of reggae…the rhythmic land,
Enticing my soul with its soothing voice
The beat of drum is banging from there.

Tonight I will free myself from my lair
Dance the night away with the native boys,
Listen to the rhapsody of the band
Their music’s spicier than paprika.

Tonight my spirit will fly without tears
In sync with reggae…the sound without fears.

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  • pappacass
    January 19, 2008
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    nice

    i enjoyed this....congrats on the silver


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 19, 2008

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    That sounds like a wonderful place to be right about now. Great write, thank you for entering. Good luck.


    whisper


  • And Hyetal
    December 9, 2007

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    I feel like dancing! Great description of a soul flying to music. Thank you for entering my contest!

    Always,
    Cassie


  • 2lullabyhaven
    November 20, 2007

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    Wow, today(hahaha)it feels like I have already went there. thanks for the experience-your poem takes one en-flight...smile