I'm so tired of being real
When all my friends are so fake
Why's it worth my time
To even have friends
One gets mad at me
Then they're all mad at me
Friends are way too dramatic
It's not worth the pain,
some days
And then theres the days
When friends are worth everything
and then some
Right now, I wish I was never born
Right now, I wish I was still home sleeping
Right now, I wish I was someone else.
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im having a fucking bad day!
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Ugh...
I KNOW what that is like. Having friends mad at you sucks... and the drama is never-ending, and sometimes they don't even have a good reason for being mad at you, but then there are just those days that make everything worth it.
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dont leave me i love you..... well this is a goood poem but sad.
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right now i crapped myself. and stuff...... good poem.
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ooooooooooo wait.................sweet @$$ concerts in LIMO'S!!!!!!!!!!
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freaking best times ever!
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oh, yeah, and it's worth the time to have friends because then you get to go to sweet @$$ concerts!
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of course!
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I like how you pretty much just flat out say how you're feeling when you write poems. I don't wish you were someone else and I bet Mr. Schribber doesn't either!! lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol is so overrated........and I just read the comment under mine after I wrote the first part of this.
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thank you.
but some days i wish i could "express my bad day with a little more eloquence"
but thats not me.
so it's all good- and ya know, i think mr. schribber would be hurt if i wasn't myself!
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well hopefully...you will think a little better next time you want to express your bad day with a little more eloquence. First of all, the feeling that you are the only one, who you may depend on or lean on, is quite self conceited. In being so, wouldn't it better to hear rather then "When all my friends are so fake", wouldn't it be better to say "Leaning on my friends is like leaning on a bookshelf, it tends to fall over sometimes
But rather then fall, to lose it all, I'd rather not waste my time?" Some comedy Sir or Lady, the point of the poem is to express your anger...through a creative manner, not a simple GAR like a Pirate
Well I do hope your day goes better, and do hope that you'll think a little clearer the next time you write a poem.
Godspeed
A.S.
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