rising
filling darkness
creating distance
even among entwined limbs;
faces glance to walls.
Passion danced
such sincere rhythms
well planned steps,
deeper desire was left
as if in waiting,
in silence.
Realizing
as heartbeats settled
and senses unwrapped,
missing the words,
once whispered
unforgettable words
fire lights in mind
and body;
igniting imagination
hungering eyes...
now
pale silence,
turning and facing walls.
Author notes
sensuality .....tell me the things you remember about someone that you love (or loved) Little things that ignite your senses )
and
inspired by the pic
In a list
A contest entry
- 15/15/15 Quickie by poet2angels.
475 points, ended November 23, 2007, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This one got to me....My heart sensed the words floating like memories unleashed. I really love this and feel that the reader catches a glimpse of a personal side of your heart...
It is difficult to say how much I loved this
Lynda
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wow..very lovely piece again..so passionate..those moments that the person can not just forget..great poem!
Amarige
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