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Her Toy

If I can send my love to her,
In any form,
I would have to be her toy,
The pink one I don't know,
The red one well maybe so,
I could feel her wetness,
Vibrating her inside,
While the door is locked,
Boy how one toy can satisfy,
And how I wish I was that toy,
So therefore my love she shall receive,
Oh and when she wipes me clean,
Now that's a feeling like no other.
Big or small,
Loose or tight,
As long as I am her toy,
Now that's alright.
Just thinking about this,
Makes me wet,
Oh ow I wish I was her toy,
Waterproof,
Latex,
Vibrating,
Ooh I can please her,
I know that for sure,
But since I can't send myself to her,
Then God make me her toy.
Vibrating, pink, latex, waterproof, ten different speeds,
Hey man yeah that's me,
Inside of her,
Making her moan,
Oh yes I am oh so good,
For I am her toy.
I can satisfy any woman that I want,
But the only one I want is her,
Buzz I can vibrate,
And make her wet,
Soak up her juices,
MMMmmmmm I am her toy,
And only hers,
Satisfy her when she wants me,
Oh yeah baby I got ten speeds,
From slow to fast,
What do you prefer?
Set my speed,
And insert me,
So off we can go,
Then you can wipe me clean,
For I am your toy,
And I love having your hands on me.
She trembles when she reaches the peek,
I'm still go buzz boys,
As she finally blows,
The door still locked,
Muffled cries,
Hehehehe I'm so much better than a guy.
For baby I got ten speeds,
I'm water proof too,
Double the pleasure,
For I vibrate,
As her juices flow,
And now it's time for her,
To wipe me clean again.
Just the thought of this,
I could use my toy,
As I imagine that it's her,
Since I can't send my love to her,
But I could still be her toy,
All I got is my tongue,
And my two fingers,
I am somewhat water proof,
Until she get's me wet,
Then that's no longer true.
I can please you with my tongue,
I don't need ten different speeds,
For I got her,
And she got me.
I guess the way you can look at it,
Is I am her toy,
But I only got one speed,
And with my tongue I can make her wet,
Yes I can please!
Baby I am your toy,
Use me when you like!

Author notes

so what did you think??? wtf??? yeah i know that's what i get for listening to Bob and Tom.
Hope this is ok for the contest. If not let me know. I think you could use a laugh.

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  • Vampress Alayna silver member
    October 22
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    now that made me really wet


  • livingItup
    June 25

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    damn it this makes me wanna hump something lol.
    this was great. never knew anyone had the guts to write something like this.


  • ImmortalOne
    August 21, 2008
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    thats hot


  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    April 26, 2008
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    it was awsome i like it


  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    April 25, 2008
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    This is a great poem I like it alot nice


  • XxTattered WingsxX
    April 18, 2008

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    Wow! I'm not even sure what to say. I saw the title and I knew what to expect, or at least I thought I did. First off, congrats on the Silver Trophy. It is well deserved. The imagery in this poem is explosive. My God! You had me from the moment I began reading. I absolutely love the structure on this one. It was almost a blank verse, but the random rhyming just added to its mystery. All I can really think to say is... me next? lol


  • sassylibra0074
    January 17, 2008

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    yummy

    I love the eroticism in this piece, your words are tantalizing! Thanx for sharing and please continue to please us through your wonderful writing. xo


    • lesbian-in-love
      January 18, 2008
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      Thanks for the comment. I am glad you liked it. If I can please through my writing imagine what I can do in person.


  • Poetic Obscenity
    January 5, 2008

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    I love this SO much. Its AMAZING. God, now i have a little sum thing sum thin down there. He he he.
    This was adorable and loving in my opinion, not perverted but sensual.
    Very lovely indeed. Girly Love, YAY!!

    You should check out my "Bloody Love" Poem, you may just enjoy it.
    But yes, Thank you VERY MUCH for entering the contest and Good luck , though i'm not quite sure you need it. =-D


  • Tarja
    November 21, 2007

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    Not bad you dirty minded little freak! This was very intense and pretty much what I would expect from you!


    • lesbian-in-love
      November 21, 2007
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      Well thanks. I thought it was good overall. And Yeah I am dirty minded.


  • Darklordkya
    November 20, 2007
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    Great job, i loved it ^_^ your a very good writer.


  • Georgia La Mariposa
    November 20, 2007

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    This is wonderful! I love my viobrator they really r a girl's best friend lol

    • lesbian-in-love
      November 20, 2007
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      I am glad you liked it. At first I was like oh my god I did not just write that. But then I liked how it flowed.

  • ms. kitty kat
    November 20, 2007

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    actually I love it. I think its great, its interesting. but it also says to me that you love her and you seem to be happy with her. you better watch out when listening to Bob & Tom. one could get in a lot of trouble.. they are my favorite..

    great job on this poem..

    Kathy

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