The soft lights were ready
In that place she had prepared
Waiting still for his return
For love she took the dare
Sadness seemed to fill her eyes
As the clock seemed to freeze
A tear rolled slowly down her cheek
Softly falling to her knees
For the door refused to open
No one did enter into her room
Sitting there in those soft light
In a place of love's lost gloom
A contest entry
- Stimulate my mind !! take a peek its open canvas by Laura.
1300 points, ended December 9, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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orhhh this certainly is an emotional spider web ... great poem with fantastic imagery well done and good luck in the contest xx
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A very beautiful Piece You Painted the canvas well with this . Good luck in the contest Dear
Cara
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once again you have painted beauty with your words.
All of what you write speaks so loud to me, at times I can relate so closely I am unable to comment at the time of the read due to the emotion you provoke with your poetry.
You are truly a gifted poet my friend!
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Aww sad!! Stood up by love!
A very sweet but sad poem here... you painted a great picture with your words.
Brilliant as always!
x
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