Skin of lily white so smooth,
eyes of green to gently soothe.
Her love she gives with tender feel,
touch your heart with love so real.
Engulfs you with her essence sweet,
comes and makes your life complete.
Body movements she gentle sways,
embellishes the darkest days.
Drifts into nightly dreams so soft,
to journey past the skies aloft.
She'll keep your heart holds it tight,
take care of it throughout the night.
Fills your thoughts with loving her,
you long for true love to occur,
With just one kiss she makes you sigh,
you are drawn into her green eyes.
You start to stir when morning breaks,
one thought of her is all it takes.
She is all you ever want it seems,
this love found in your nightly dreams.
In a list
A contest entry
- Stimulate my mind !! take a peek its open canvas by Laura.
1300 points, ended December 9, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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ohh this is great i loved the rhyme, although i think a couple of lines can be altered to make it flow a little easier.. but hey no ones perfect not even me lolol anyway i loved the poem and it certainly fits the picture well xx
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This is such a gorgeous piece, sensual and soft, you write with such beauty, I expect to see this on the podium of this contest
Karen
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Wow!
Oh wow...what a strong poem. Flowed VERY nicely. I loved how the rhymes were so effortless and smooth! Wow! Best of luck in the contest!
-Tim
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aww i liked it.
i liked this poem a lot. it seems to touch somewhere deep inside that only poems as well-written as this one can. The rhyme is very successful. I think you have a tallent and should keep writing.
This poem is a good example of successful and immaginatively structured writing.
keep writing,
Holly.
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this is a wonderful write and i am positive laura is going to love it and be inspired. well done and best of luck
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SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!
I do have my dream lady in my dreams every night, Now only if she would truly come in person
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Wonderful take on this graphic. Great flow creating beautiful sentiments of emotional longing.
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Good morning June.
Thank you for stopping by and leaving a nice comment. Always brings a smile to hear from my dear friend. Take care, Sandy 
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bravo
Ah, such a fluid piece, as fluid and as warm as the water that she wades in in the photo...well done!! bravo... bravo... bravo...
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Thank you Michael, Always so nice to hear from you. I am glad you enjoyed. You take care. Always, Sandy
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this is absolutely beautiful... not to mention the picture and the background you have chosen... your rhyming is flawless... in general... just a gorgeous piece and stunning write... keep it up
hugs,
georgie,
xxx
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