Water, crystal clear
and pure as a baby's breath--
elixir of life.
A contest entry
- Haiku-Me.....Me Haiku by UnchartedPoet.
1100 points, ended November 23, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Boo Hiss (just kidding)
Congrats on your Hi-que Poem
(the weirdest kind of poem going)
Honorable Winner, I bow before you
Honorable Poet, we all adore you
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I can write one of these things
Mine will sound like a bird sings
Tweet, tweet
And I repeat
Tweet, tweet
Now THIS is true Hi-Que
Tiki Cat
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If only water could give us a little youth again Thanks for entering my contest.
Jen
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If only ANYTHING could give us our youth back! Thank you, UP, for commenting.
Bill
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Oh...beautiful stunning words! Good luck in the contest.
Shaz xx
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Thank you very much, Shaz--good luck to yoy also.
Bill
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Elixer of life!!! It certainly is Bill, Few words , perfect description....A winner in my books my friend...good luck...mal
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i always find haikus hard to comment on although this one is really very good. it brings all sorts of thoughts to mind... one in particular of where i was just standing under a waterfall in the middle of the bush alone and the water was just crystal clear... wish i could have stayed there forever
hugs,
feral,
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