She danced around
not caring about the puddles
she had a great date
he even proposed
She's dancing on air
and splashing in water
oblivious to their stares
her hearts still a'flutter
She can't remember
any better feeling than this
she had waited a long time
and now it's finally a reality
Author notes
Picture prompt given by host. Anonymous contest, no names in comments please, BEST OF LUCK TO ALL
In a list
A contest entry
- 24 hour contest... by poet2angels.
475 points, ended November 23, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lovely story of dreams come true...
TY for entering!
Lynda
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sweeeet
less is more in this poem. sweet and straight to the point. thanx, conni
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