Frozen crystal flakes.
A flurry of snow does fall,
winter wonderland.
Author notes
Prompt; I have fallen in love with Haiku's, give me your best.
5~7~5 syllable counter used.
A contest entry
- Haiku-Me.....Me Haiku by UnchartedPoet.
1100 points, ended November 23, 2007, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haiku's Haiku's And More Haiku's by SmokinHotWhiteTiger.
600 points, ended December 16, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice haiku about winter.
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Thank You For Entering
This is a very incredible poem and I really love how well you have penned this poem. your words reflect beauty that is all over and surrounded by us all dueing that time of the season. winter to me is and has always been a frozen slumber in time as beauty lies by its surroundings and the tranquility it brings to us all! any ways very well penned and excellent job and good luck -
Beautiful .......
Peaceful.....
Write on.
*PEACE*
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Nicely done
Seems we think somewhat alike ..lol. We both used Winter Wonderland as our last line..my winter one in another contest..nicely done as usual and best wishes in the contest,
Evan
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I keep telling you that you may be the Queen of evil but you got a lil something going on with this stuff.
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Nice job Pink ~
It will be here before we know it ~
Good luck,
Bear ~
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Ahhhhhh.....I need to get my winter play clothes on, time to make snow angels
Thanks for entering my contest.
Jen -
Beautiful!! Ohhh... makes me want to go and run and play in the snow!!! (darn it... it's coming into summer here! lol)
Loved it! (I gotta try the Haiku some time)
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Really nice. Captured a cold scene made me shiver. syllables fine to,
mine was off a tad.
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