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rip out your soul

a glint in your eyes,
as sick as your mind,
a longing never been filled.
something so dark
wriggles through
wanting to escape
as you see her,
you know,
you know what you need
what you crave.
follow her to a secluded place
to relief you of your sick delusions.
you come up behind her,
licking your lips;
as you plunge and rip and tear.
a knife tipped with scarlet
smiles at you.you know.
limp and lifeless,
you kneel down beside her,
with only one thing in mind.
how tasty does she look?
how do much you need her?
no longer can you wait,
you tear into her stomach.
watching the blood poor out,
a climax you never knew possible
pulsates through your veins.
as you smell the wound,
feel the texture
of the heart you feel in your hand.
obliterate all logic thought,
as you rip it open,
smearing the blood upon your face,
feeling her life.
a sick sexual pleasure overtakes you,
you bite into the soft,sumptuous tissue
digesting her life,her love,her soul.
you pick her off bit by bit,
devouring like an animal.
until at last you see her face,
and your heart sinks,
as you see the face of the only woman you ever loved staring back at you
your wife, your life, is gone

Author notes

to me..thats kinda sick..dunno about yew...dunno if it's dark..just kinda sick and weird.but i gave it a go

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  • Lil-Miss-Invisible
    November 22, 2007

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    wow, its cool. Very sad at the end when he finds its his wife. Its a real twister. Its very awesome, i think. good luck in the contest.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    November 20, 2007

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    This is a good piece .Thank you for sharing this with me .Goodlukc to you in this contest.Best wishes and much love always