A Taste of Honey

Your tongue to mine
Desire time
We twist and turn
Such lust to burn

As you explore
with knowing touch

each sweet caress
brings sighs of wonder

All I am is yours
a blossom in your hands
my petals I unfurl to you
honeyed nectar flowing

I'm buried deep
Within my treasure
Warm and soft
This flesh of pleasure

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A contest entry

Stimulate my mind !! take a peek its open canvas by Laura. 1300 points, ended December 9, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Bob Fox
November 22, 2007
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Margaret
is the heart. I am but an envoy
Gods Precious
November 22, 2007

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I'm buried deep
Within my treasure
Warm and soft
This flesh of pleasure

This just said something to me - but which of your poems does not.

Greatly written
Laura
November 21, 2007

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firstly let me say i dont know who you are lolol i was alittle confused by the rhythem of the poem it seemed to rhyme then not then did. overall it is a great poem with loads of promise. one which i would love to read again before judging xxx
- pearl-dragon
  November 21, 2007
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  Thank you for your comment. Maybe I should explain, my collaborator likes to rhyme but I prefer not to most times so I guess that's the way it came out...I did try but couldn't make it seem natural so I resorted to my usual style of writing. Sorry for the confusion
YoursTrulyJulie
November 20, 2007

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Great write you two
This is a very well done collab Best of luck in this contest
Passionate Phoenix
November 20, 2007
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wow brilliantly done, nice wording used. lovely imagery, well done and good luck xx