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buttoned up











      you are a stitch
      and the needles work
      with moment's hesitation,

      criss-crosses and spindle lines
      etching the threads,

                as simple traces

      of feathered reality

          and i was green
            in red's flavor;

      whence you pegged me
      to your fabrics,

      and i was left there

            in stillness











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  • Lavender Butterfly
    November 21, 2007

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    Well you certainly got my attention. Fabulous imagery and metaphor. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.