Reds and gold are gone
Jack Frost running through the trees
Bringing with him snow
In a list
A contest entry
- Haiku-Me.....Me Haiku by UnchartedPoet.
1100 points, ended November 23, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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It's rare to come upon a 5-7-5 haiku in English with a nature theme and nature words in them these days. This one brings to me the transition from autumnal colours into the quilting of white... Jack Frost makes a lively image in my mind. That seems to contrast with the title itself, not that haiku really needs any titling. I suppose with this title and another line it could be written out like a senryu. Forgive the talkativeness of this comment. I guess the bleakness can be connected to the brilliant colours of autumn in contrast with the blandness of winter's white.
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Love the colors of Fall, but I do enjoy the winter white, thank you for entering my contest
Jen
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Winter is truly here, great write, good luck in the contest!
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This is a really good Haiku. Thank you for sharing this with me and good luck to you and your Haiku in this contest. May God bless you in everything you do and write. Keep up the excellent work.
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