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[ wind through the olive branches ]

wind through olive branches
lemon orchard scent
relaxation.

A contest entry

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  • Keyser Soze gold member
    November 28, 2007
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    Hmm. I really enjoy this.
    While I do prefer longer poems, as you can do more to guide the reader, shorter poems, if done well, can present that short moment as the mind falls into the oblivion; the daydream.
    This daydream, I liked very much. Thank you


  • UnchartedPoet
    November 20, 2007
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    I'm breathing and smelling, great visual Thank you for entering my contest

    Jen