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Haiku 91

blocking my pathway
unaware of my approach
newspun spider's web

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  • Bad Bill
    November 20, 2007
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    A very smoothly-executed haiku--lovely work.
    Bill


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 20, 2007
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    Nicely done, good luck


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 20, 2007

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    Ahh I do like to stop by every now and then and see what wonderful new haiku there are... you always capture the little things and turn them into something beautiful

    Karen


  • HeavenScent4U
    November 20, 2007

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    lol have a few of those around, gives me the jeebies walking through them well done! best of luck to you in this contest, be well and be blessed


  • UnchartedPoet
    November 20, 2007

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    Oh how I don't like spiders, but I could actually feel myself walking thru one Thanks for entering my contest

    Jen

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