Darkness surrounds encased in a blissful void
Not a sound wakes the mind from it undisturbed slumber
Or so it seems
Arms lovingly embrace
Hands caressing bare skin
The naked body yearning for more
Yearning for more
Desire fills the void with deep crimson red
Passion explodes in a cascade of want
Two entities equal in heart body and soul
Transcend the boundaries of time and space
Rising together as they experience becoming one
Rhythm ensues with a growing filling of pleasure
“Faster” whispers a softened moan
“Harder” begs a strangled groan
A bombardment of pure unadulterated ecstasy
Even the stars pale in comparison to the unknown pleasure energy
Sweat glisten on taunt skin as the journey reaches it climax
Cries and screams of joy escape surprised lips as two are one
Like a rollercoaster heaven falls fast into a blissful void…
Eyes open to familiar darkness and light
Only a picture in hand remains of yet another wishful dream
Breathing in pants a reminder from a need unfulfilled
One day…
A contest entry
- Icecubes and Feathers - 1250 points!!! by Emmyb.
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Comments
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Nice write, enjoyed it, all the best.
mj.
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Very nice write...
Kudos Keep up the good work!!
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fantastic
beautifully written. sensual and delicate. welldone on this fantastic write. and thanks for entering. Emmyb -
wow this poem is amazing its so detailed and soo deep and it still leaves just enough to the imagination this is a wonderful dedication and the person you wrote it for is very lucky to have you, i like this poem's flow and emotions, keep up the great writing, -Amy
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a good piece of poetry that twists darkness and pleasure into the folds of love's magnificence, heights reached, the stars explored while sighs rip the universe to shreds.
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i loved this, in the younger years you always want to jump into the act but sometimes it's the anticipation that makes it all worth while. Great job here!
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Amazing!!
Woooooooh! That was so crazy. It has great imagery. It was truly an amazing poem. You shifted us wonderfully. The poem started slowly and effortlessly, then it began to CLIMAX, and then you left us just as gently and smoothly as you began. I wish I were this good a writter. But I doubt so much as that I could write something so extraordinary! It is true masterpiece.
Bravo, bravo!
Thank you for sharing this with me.
It is much appreciated.
A wonderful contribution to AP!
God Bless dear friend.
Have a great day!
~Only1love4ever
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I like.....give an exhale after the poem.Let go take my cold shower now.
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Hot & Sweet
I liked the twist at the end. 'It was all just a dream' usually comes off cheap, but in this poem it made the erotic aspect oddly sweeter. This walks a fine line between erotic and over-the-top. The last stanza takes us back down gently and gracefully. Sexy and yearning. I like it.
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WOW
What an entance poem......... longing for more I can for the picture in my head.
Great piece
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This is really an amazing poem. I could feel each line and my heart hung on every word. You did an amazing job with this. God bless you in all that you do and write and I look forward to reading more from you as my time allows me too.
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