Evil laughs this eve.
Creatures of light are running,
To escape the dark.
Shade covers the moon,
The celestial orb shines not.
Clouds now mock my sight.
Strange shapes my mind sees.
Unknown foes attack my peace,
On this moonless night.
Fear ravages me,
As I am left all alone.
But am I alone?
Courage now floods me,
Readying me for the fight.
Shadows now will fear.
A contest entry
- Haiku-Me.....Me Haiku by UnchartedPoet.
1100 points, ended November 23, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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haha
verry good, a great description of the pre battle feelings. I must speak to you.
May the stars always light your path.
DW -
Nicely-controlled and balanced set of haiku, with some vivid imagery. Well done.
Bill
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Wow, this is superb, a truly great set of Haikus...good luck in the contest
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Wowzers!!
And I struggle with one verse of Haiku Great chain, loved it Good luck in the contest! -
lol taking the dark route?
very creative chain and a tad on the uplifting side towrds the end. best of luck to you in this contest, be well and be blessed
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This puts a little different spin on a Haiku, more of a dark side of the moon. Thanks for entering my contest
Jen
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