A splash of courage
or river of doubt
Know within my heart
Is where I must start.
Reaching for you
Guiding through time
Hoping for tomorrow
To bring far from sorrow.
Take back your kisses
Your rainfall of tears
When the time is right
I'll be for you each night.
A contest entry
- 24 hour contest... by poet2angels.
475 points, ended November 23, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please do not critique it, I like nice comments not bad.
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This is really good.Gives alot of hope and promise for a new day.Is very encouraging and wishful I think.You are wanting to reach out for them and take away their sadness and pain.You say it so well and in such a very few lines you portray those thoughtd and feelins.great job.hope you win.
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This is so lovely. It brings tears to my eyes. So very sweet and beautiful
Lynda
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very sweet good luck in the contest
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Sweet
This one was sweet. This has some hope in it. Nice work.
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Very romantic piece
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Lovely romantic piece, perhaps a title could be borrowed from your second line "river of doubt". well done and best wishes to you.
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Nice
Short but sweet and awesome meaning
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great work once more
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