Drawn to call of water's wild
I feel the rush of whispered pleasure
Breathless dance in harmonious shadows
Osmosis of life for heart to savour
Sighing rhythms of eclectic romance
That once lost, teasingly awaits re-discovery
Passion saunters in and out on a whim
Mimicking each gasp of lament
Brazen pendulum of love's attention
Caresses with wafers of therapeutic fingers
This cool crystal river showers the spirit with ardour
Love now flowing freely through a meandering soul
Author notes
"Though lovers be lost love shall not."
Dylan Thomas and image prompt.
A contest entry
- 24 hour contest... by poet2angels.
475 points, ended November 23, 2007, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Detailed critique welcome
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again and again
You never cease to amaze me
your talent knows
no
bounds..
You paint beautiful images in my mind
with your words......
And I love every second of it
Love,
Sarah
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congrats
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This is gorgeous kind of the feeling of holy water cleansing a soul. beautiful!!!
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very well done, a mix of showing and telling, abstract and mood filled; very expressive writing here...PK
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This is breathtaking!
Such a wondrous spirit this expresses so well...
Beautiful piece!
Lynda
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"This cool crystal river showers the spirit with ardour
Love now flowing freely through a meandering soul"
A heart~felt penning, Poet. It sounds as though you're familiar with Love's symptoms. 
Good luck in Lynda's contest. Wanda
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wow great write good luck
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