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Never lost







a fountain of love
brings inside light..heat,
sometimes sadness, flows any sorrow that exists.

never feels rage
nursemaid to lose
soul, a slave lives in suffering.

escapes, shrinks in a corner
to cry freely in pain,
to hide weeping, not to hurt.

longing erases, prune hurt,
to offer solitude,
trying world to hide, never taking away heart.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: "Though lovers be lost love shall not."
Dylan Thomas

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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 23, 2007
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    Such a bbittersweet piece of love and emotion..
    Beautifully done
    ty for entering
    Lynda