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Raindancer

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She spends her evenings in the rain dancing in puddles,
and stomping to the sounds of endless raindrops on the ground.
She is always at her most inspired state here as the sky turns gray,
and thunder roars throughout the universe overhead.

Many think that she is a fairy or some kind of immortal being.
She glows so radiantly in the dark and lights up the night,
with her magical wings and endless spirit that soars throughout time.
The trees watch her in awe as she dances so carefree in their forest.

Hundreds come from all over to witness firsthand,
the beauty and amazement that she brings with every step.
As the raindrops continue to fall she continues to dance,
capturing the hearts of each and every one of us.

Author notes

Picture Prompt
12 Lines of Wonder

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 23, 2007
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    This is so lovely!
    Perfect take on the prompt..Great job!

    Lynda


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    November 22, 2007

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    Wow. That was absolutely beautiful. I loved where you went with the pic. Wow.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Prison of Lyme
    November 20, 2007
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    precious


  • Katie Lazette
    November 20, 2007

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    Another wonderful write. I used to like to dance in the rain, but I always wore my rain gear. Good luck in the contest.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 20, 2007
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    another sweet piece...

    pop! hear that? it's another hit! lots of luck in the contest!

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