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Mystic Mistress

Glorified mistress
Forever behold
The beauty of
Passion
Forever unfolds
You hold my world
As ours is the greatest story ever told.

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A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your entry: Mystic Mistress
    Love the weaving of words You have brought forward
    also the line...
    Forever behold
    and Forever unfolds
    You hold my world...just tugs at the heartstrings

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Judging will be done shortly~~
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • CherryOnTop gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    "Glorified mistress" there is always beauty and passion with a mistress. The greatet story ever told. So warm and loving and beautiful.


  • Astral Flare
    November 20, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this write. It fits perfectly with the picture. Best of luck in the contest and I hope to read more of your work soon!
    God bless,
    -Tim


  • MassMan
    November 20, 2007

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    Mystic Mistress
    or
    Gravitational Goddess
    or
    Miss Universe of Love

    (Just a few suggestions for Titles to your nice poem.)

    David


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    November 20, 2007

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    Beautiful work here my friend!
    Good luck to you with it in
    the contest and keep it up!




    Jeremy0826

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