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The Artist

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Running your fingers

down my spine

with gentle exploration,


you softly blew away

the dust that had gathered

from neglect

& turned the pages of my life,

sculpting contours

of my heart.

You threw open

shuttered windows,

a fresh burst of air

breaking through brick & mortar

I had laid so diligently

around my soul,

enlarging silent spaces,

leaving me a quiet place

where I could dwell & dream

away from the madness

of this wild world.

You held my hair

within your hands,

wrapping its length

around your neck,


a silken tie

to bind us together

throughout time.

You traced my flesh

with tenderness ~


incredible, indelible ink

painting unforgettable landscapes

as we nurtured each other's breath,

understanding just how precious

the gift of life & laughter

may become

during sacred moments

like these.

I weep no more for beauty,

embraced by the memories

you gave me,

golden as the sun descends,

waiting only

for moonlight's caress...





 

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Art: "Desire" by Pino Daeni




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  • Danny Beatty gold member
    April 23

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    too lovely, I am your new moonlight's caress ... you are my petals and root of night and day ...


    • Night Hope gold member
      April 23
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      And you, my Love...you are my garden & my gardener...you cultivate my soil, plant new & tender seeds each evening...& stroll softly, slowly, silently through my branches under moonlight. God, I love you...& your wild, warm words.


  • LadyUnique silver member
    February 28, 2008

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    i think i actually physically swayed when i read this to have a link such as this with another person is something we all dream of, long for. this is truly beautiful
    best of luck


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 23, 2008

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    Wow, this is such a gorgeous piece!
    You did a wonderful job putting this
    one together my friend. Great imagery
    and emotions here. Keep up the wonderful
    work and thanks so much for sharing it
    with us all here!





    Jeremy0826


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    February 15, 2008
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    I have to say this was breathtakingly beautiful. Just simply a wonderful read!


  • Namita
    February 15, 2008

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    I love Pino art! You just made it come alive with the beauty of your words... so many unforgettable lines painted here... amazing, Wanda.

    - namita


    • Night Hope gold member
      February 16, 2008
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      http://www.art.com

      You can find mostly anything you like there, Namita. I've used quite a few of Pino's paintings on my poems over the past few years. Amazing work.


  • just mercedes gold member
    February 15, 2008

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    this is beautiful, creation as an act of love, your words flow with passion restrained and elegant, matching to perfection the art work.


  • Kathryn Bowden
    February 15, 2008
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    beautiful, really drew me in.


  • Nicolette gold member
    November 29, 2007

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    I liked the sense of creation and creativity in this poem…. the process of painting, of sculpting, of being created by the lover’s touch. I also liked the sense of renewal I got from reading here, as well as the quiet sense of serenity…a sanctuary away from the “wild world”. A lovely portrait of love’s changing effects and a very good take on the contest theme. I liked the softness here too….and the light that shines from these words. Beautiful poetry – thank you so much for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Timothy Cameron gold member
    November 25, 2007
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    Yes, I sure know this one.


  • zochit2me gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    Very beautiful
    Sigh
    Makes me want to wrap hair around someones neck
    Truthfully- this is eloquently written with deep emotion and a loving heart.

    Becky


  • kaibab silver member
    November 20, 2007

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    Such a lovely drifiting poetry...fills my heart with what it is to live in dreamstate...I have been depressed this week scribe so please firgive...trying to return to normal...so reading your incredible words is just the ticket...lovely this is...


  • SabaSophiya
    November 20, 2007
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    Beyond Beautiful


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    November 20, 2007

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    oh, you write so that every line is so full of emotion and image.... this is especialy beautiful gf....truly a work of word and iamge-making art.


  • tomisb
    November 20, 2007

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    There is a way your words cascade down the page in thoughts and feelings to the last verse where they land balanced on a possibility. Ready. Waiting for a chance to be more than words, greater than promise -- a reality that leaves the world to towards and sigh after. Beautiful.

    Love, Tom B.


  • Cat
    November 20, 2007
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    beautiful writing...



    m


  • Jonathan ROBIN
    November 20, 2007

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    Unforgettable Landscapes

    leaving me a quiet place
    where I could dwell & dream
    away from the madness
    of this wild world.

    ....


    True to herself incredible, indelible ink painting unforgettable landscapes, this composition cannot fail to impress and adds yet another golden leaf to a a daily harvest too few could dream of garnering in a golden lifetime.

  • Rowan gold member
    November 20, 2007

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    I love the imagery of wrapping hair around necks~ a love knot. Wonderfully soft, and sensual, my friend. The shape of love indeed.

  • Bad Bill
    November 20, 2007

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    Superb

    You have excelled yourself with this incredibly sensuous and passionate poem. If I ever need a map of love, you will definitely be my cartographer! If this doesn't win a trophy, then there ain't no justice.
    Bill


  • PageTurner
    November 20, 2007

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    You have captured my Heart and Soul with your seductive, intoxicating whisperings of Love! Passionately telling of tender touchings, that inflame and excite both body and mind. My senses sway sweetly, completely taken by your words. You m'dear, are The Artist...

    "I weep no more for beauty,
    embraced by the memories
    you gave me,

    golden as the sun descends,

    waiting only
    for moonlight's caress..."

    ...Sighhh!

    Passionate Penning, Scribe.

    ~ Nicky♥


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    November 20, 2007

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    Any man would be bowled over by this. I know I would. Very passionate and romantic. Nicely done.

    Mark


  • Cherokee
    November 20, 2007
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    That is so lovely.

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