Alone at night I think of you and the urgency in your lips...
the pure desire in you hands
when I look into your eyes....
beyond first glance
after the sparks...
I see you
you the witness
you the revealer
its a lovely loop of show and see
please just let it be
Please tell me what you think
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Love can be a crazy thing at times, we just have to follow the roller coaster and see what comes to us... well done on a great write here
Karen -
This is a very beautiful poem. You did an excellent job with this piece. Such strong emotions flow with this. Keep up the excellent work and God bless you in everything you and do and write, and I look forward to reading more from you as my time permits. To be both the witness and revealer in the "game" of finding love is so greate when you know you just can't lose, sometimes in order to establish greatness you must be willing to risk it all even if you just might fall.
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