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Taste You

 I watch as you step out the shower
Water falling from your body
The way the water is running down your chest , down to your abs is turning me
You turn around to catch me staring at you with a devilish smile
You smile with such confidence that my pussy is now soaking wet
I rub my clit while watching you dry off
Damn I can’t take this shit no more
So I get down on my hands and knee and slowly crawl over to you
Kissing you on your leg, thigh right up to my wonderful surprise
I slowly lick the tip teasing wanting you to beg for more
And you did I knew you would
Take me baby
Take me deep into your mouth
Please your daddy the way he likes
I waste no time and deep throat your shit
Taking in every inch of your huge dick
I lick and suck until my mouth start to hurt
But I didn’t give a fuck I wanted my daddy to cum
I started to suck the tip while giving you a hand job too
You felt back against the wall because you was becoming weak
Your eyes were close and your hand upon my head
You let out a manly roar
Oh shit you forgot to tell me you were cumin
By: Levesta

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  • mcfreeman
    June 14, 2008
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    I'll never tell

    your shit is so damn HOT....I'll never tell if I'm cumming or not.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    January 14, 2008

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    Well done...and congrats to you on the silver trophy, it is definately well deserved.

    **Master Ktulu**

  • New-n-Improved
    November 21, 2007

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    I'm Cummin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This is hot. I want to taste you if you know what I mean. This poem is a great way to make a man feel like a king especially a black man. You really out did your self with this one. I want more. Give me more. Keep writingand I'll keep reading.


  • WillAlwaysLove silver member
    November 21, 2007

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    Hot poem! Now I want to get my man! Your words were awesome and raw, the way I like it. You penn was great as was you rhythm. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!


  • BamaSlim
    November 21, 2007
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    Hot baby...very hot. Imagining that I was there in your mind body and soul.....

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