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Do you want me to make you move?

Moving from the top to the floor
Behind the gently closed door
Softly tracing each surface
Trailing along with loving purpose

I see all that shines here
Illuminating all that is near
Moving slowly lower, I prove
That I can make you move

Will you move with me tonight
Into something not quite right
Maybe not today, but soon I say
When we shall be in the right way

So for this long moment before
Let us move behind the closed door
To take this slight chance
And continue this exciting dance

Here I will ask you a simple question
Maybe just a simple innocent suggestion
"Do you want me to make you move?"
Your eyes will always say you approve

Author notes

Well do you? hehehe I wonder if you will remember my beautiful friend. I love you.

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  • Luthien Luinwe
    November 22, 2007
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    Of course I remember my wonderful lover...of course... Beautiful and sensual write!

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    November 20, 2007

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    Well I feel like I stepped into the middle of a private moment... excuse me.. hehe beautiful and from the heart

    Karen