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Insanity

In The space she sits,
water trickles
and memories of giggles remain.
That's all that's left of this once happy place.

Now her thoughts racing
because of the meth ?
or because she can't control herself.

the weapon of freedom,
she holds in her mouth.
And no one knows
what she's enduring

I can't believe it now.
i can't take them now.

She again notices her thoughts
racing
breathing.
Moving.
Controlling

These happenings in her head
as she pens her shaky farewell to them. To no one.

Giggles, Splashes, Bubbles, interrupted by a cut or two

 

It just so happens the last thing she says makes no sense at all

 

<b>[Let me live]</b> 

 

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  • Steven015
    January 15, 2008

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    damn girl..i like this one even better! :-)
    ima have to step my game up lol
    i like to write poetry that ryhmes but you make this sound really good


    • no-way-ap
      January 15, 2008
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      lol

      i usually lik epoems that rhyme. My poem Joyride rhymes, it's a bit cliche though lol.


  • filth in th beuty
    December 8, 2007
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    cool. i love it