A Bruised face
A broken bone
A body for sale
A soul for loan.
A cry for help
A blood stained tear.
An upset child.
Filled with fear.
A worthless feeling
An ugly sight.
A broken heart
After a vicious fight.
A sadness
A hollowness you cant avoid.
A person hurt
An angel destroyed.
A contest entry
- Erase the Hate Stop Child Abuse November Contest- Child Sexual Abuse by Page Shut down.
600 points, ended December 7, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - EDIT: ADDING POINTS! Come Be A Voice...Hearts Loving and True, Sincere...Lets Speak Out On Abuse..And start DOING instead of just watching... by PassionsPromise.
2500 points, ended December 10, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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G'Day mate
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Oh my gosh. What a write, you have kept a strong flow rhyme and imagery.
Amazingly emotional write.
Thank you for your entry
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~AJ
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this one hit deep. great job here. Thank you for having the courage to stand and fight. Being a voice for others I commend you.
Much light
Tory
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I am glad you got out of it before you became another statistic on a sheet of paper somewhere, so many do not make it out. Excellent write, thank you so much for entering it. Please put in your authors notes if Tory can use this in her book...Scott & Tory
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Thanks for you comments!! Of course Tory can use it in her book!! I think the book will serve a great purpose in itself!!
Again thanks
Kind regards Lisa
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WOW
This is great, it's amazing. i have lost all my words its so good. and i can really relaye to all of it.
keep on writing
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Thank heaps for your comments!!
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Spectacular...
This poem is amazing in itself. I have lived through exactly what you describe in the first half and have personally experienced the last line. It brought back memories and I can really relate. Great keep writing.
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Thankyou
Thanks heaps!!
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This is sadly a piece a lot of people will understand a little more than they would care to admit.. well done on putting this down... very true and vivid
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Thankyou
Thanks heapS!
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