I imagine a deep voice
whispering loving devotions
as strong arms wrap around me
and I lay my head upon his chest.
Our magical day
spent walking
in the park
after a picnic lunch.
Followed by dinner
by candlelight
at a cozy restaurant
in a booth just for two.
One day,
bended on one knee,
you will ask me
that all important question.
Our souls combined,
eternally intertwined
on our way
to our new life.
It won't be easy.
It involves hard work.
A lifetime with you
outweighs the challenges.
I hope one day,
we can tell our grandchildren
the beautiful story
of our budding affair.
When I am old and dying,
you'll sit by my side.
A true love romance
even if it's only in my mind.
A contest entry
- Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for contributing to reading list of The Poetic Bandits
~Lilac
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nicely done. very heartfelt and romantic. oh to grow old with the one we love, such a wonderful thing. i loved this poem all the way to the end until i got to the last stanza. it was so romantic and lovely but the first two lines of that last stanza kind of ruffled my feathers a bit because, well old and dying just wasn't what i expected lol
what a wonderful dream/day dream to have though
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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absolutely gorgeous and thats what true romance is all about its not all the roses and diamonds that everyone talks of in movies and such no no
love true romance is just being with someone who you want to share your life with and just being together enjoying that feeling of mutual joy that overpowers all else
and thats what you wrote and thats what we all need to hear thank you
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What lovely thoughts you have penned here. Something we all hope for. Liked the flow, and sentiments you have expressed so well here. Don't ever give up on this wish - dreams do come true.
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Nicely Done
Sometimes all we can do is dream, those of us without. Dreams are wishes the heart makes, and it seems we dream and wish alike. Nicely penned,
Evan
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awwwww tis a love to remember, even if its in your mind. success in the contest.
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