Folding as an autumn leaf with veins delineated and tough, skin fragile and fragmented with many tiny holes. Having fallen from a great height, yet landing softly, among the masses. Folding as an autumn leaf, self-absorbed in the midst of thousands. A pale, cold-sick brown, like a sepia sunrise, blanketed with frozen air.
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Wow
nice imagery and vocab. Throughly explained and well thought out.
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Well... this didn't really have the format or the structure of a poem... but I was captivated by the amazing imagery and detail... very well done.. I would suggest more length... but I seriously thought this was just gorgeous. Well done.
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Wow
I am left speechless... Thats a good thing.
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Your imagery is beautiful & brutal
it made my heart r e a c h out to you!
very beautiful and so lovely written!
This could be a metaphor of great strength that one
who is facing addiction could relate to....
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))
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I liked it!
I loved the imagery your words were able to create in my mind. Your words flowed perfectly, and I admire that in a poem. Good work.
-Tim
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Absolutely beautiful wording. Very depressing and makes me think a lot of my life at the moment actually... but a brilliant piece all the same
hugs,
georgie,
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A very nice image you've created.
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