Consumed again
By thoughts of you
I can't escape them
Darkening my days
With saddening ways
I wonder if you'll ever know
Provoked again
By curiosity
I can't escape it
Controlling my life
With every strife
I wonder if you'll ever know
Crying again
My lonely tears
I can't escape them
Staining my cheeks
With mascara streaks
I wonder if you'll ever know
Lost again
In what could have been
I can't escape it
Passing the time
With what should be mine
I wonder if you'll ever know
If I had the chance
Just one more day
I'd tell you all the things
I was afraid to say
Scared again
By what lies within
I can't escape it
Thinking away
With what I should say
I wonder if you'll ever know
Author notes
About a boy I liked/loved a while ago that I never told. Then he moved and I lost my chance.
Enjoy!
A contest entry
- I want... by TeenageTears.
450 points, ended December 3, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I bear my soul to you... be honest & gentle
Comments
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Awww, yeah, we can all relate to this one. As always you write beautifully sis, with the descriptions of feelings and pain just right. You have someone you love now though, so even if you missed your chance, it didn't condemn you. Great job as always, keep it up! Luvs!
Hannah
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(Mum's comment)
Brilliant! I liked it, been in that situation myself. i really felt what u was saying. well done -
this is a an awsome write, sorry to hear he moved though, but if it was ment to be you'll meet again right?
thank you for entering and good luck
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I take your gentle soul and wrap you in my arms this is a good piece thank you for sharing this with me.Best wishes and much love
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