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Letter of Peace

My Precious Vicki,

I miss you more than words can say. I miss holding on to your arm & talking to you down the hallways girl, you are & will always be my bestest friend & sister.

The Fall Concert is tomorrow my dear, I have such an empty place on my side where you once stood. I miss you being in Choir singing, talking, and acting goofy with me.

So many things are happening in school & in life & I wish you were here to see it, I know you are looking down & watching over the ones you love, but its hard, it gets so hard to live on without you.

Tell Megan, My dad, and your beloved father David I said "Hi" and give each of them my love. Save me a place up there. Heaven must be beautiful with you in it.

Miss & Love You Each & Every Day,
Sara D Williams

Author notes

This is a letter I wrote to Vicki & placed under a figurine angel that was on her tree. I miss her terribly & tomorrow will be the first concert without her by my side. I apologize that this isn't a poem, but this is a letter that came from my heart. PLEASE COMMENT
Written October 22nd, 2003

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  • Ronan McDonald
    November 8, 2003
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    How dare you apologise that this isn't a poem. It's laden with meaning and it's from the heart. There is nothing to say about such a beautiful piece.

  • SternBlinkin
    October 29, 2003
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    sometimes writing letters help. I actually have a little journel that i used to write letters to my mother when she was alive b/c she would abuse me and any time i would try to make things better she wouldn't it, nothing else mattered to her but what she said and thought. so i wrote letters she never read. i might start doing that again...idk.
    luvs
    *Stern~Blinkin*


  • Bluestar
    October 23, 2003
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    beautiful - really beautiful - I'm sure Vicki has read it one hundred times over - yes, Heaven sure must be beautiful with her there
    Much love to you
    ~*blue*~
    xxx xxx

  • Beav
    October 22, 2003
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    such a sweet poem...i was thinking about losing my best friend and comforter while rading this, which made me hurt more, and it made me come close to tears! im really sorry for your losses, and id count this letter as a poem anyday.


  • SEA angel gold member
    October 22, 2003
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    Hi Sara Dawn\'s angels

    Hi too y'all from me. Vicki...if you see my mom, dad and grandmother please say HI for me too. Thank you. Sara Dawn sure does miss y''all.

  • baby kay
    October 22, 2003
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    ~Sara~
    i love this poem and it is sooooo sweet.
    i bet that viki is watching over you and she read this letter/poem. i bet that she loves it!!! she dosnt want you to shed any tears over her. well i hope i made you feel better since you said you didnt feel good. im off to read more of your poetry!!
    luv's!!

    ~~Kay~~

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