i begged you not to do it
but you paid me no attention
now that you have fucked him and sucked him
you come to me in submission
you were mine to begin with
but you hungered for his taste
one time, you said, just once
and then it can all be erased
but i cant forget the way you moaned
the way you inhaled his cock
the way you shaked it in your mouth
and swallowed every drop
the way he mounted you from behind
the way the head board shattered
the way his cum plastered your face
and that fucking insipid laughter
but now you kneel before ME
with your ass to the sky
knowing god-damned well
that both of you must die...
A contest entry
- Naughty Adults only. by Riftkin.
475 points, ended November 20, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Cheaters Club by alaskanamber.
450 points, ended February 14, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Enter all your poems that begin for a number, character or symbol. [series, part 2 of 27] by xxRainbowDawnxx.
600 points, ended June 19, 35 entries
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If you gave her permission, surely it wasn't cheating it was just fucking sick. But anyways yeah, I'd fucking go off badly if my boyfriend did that, but he really does seem that he has no desire to. I watch porn, but I neither want to venture forth and cheat.
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I can't give permission on how someone else uses their body... It should never be a question that's asked. But if asked, I'll say do as you wish. But in their head they should expect me to do as I wish when the deed is done. "Death becomes her..." LOL Anyway, thanks for the read. I'm glad it sparked a comment.
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i always enjoy some good raunchy anger. Possibly a good spanking could fix the whole situation. Thanks for entering and good luck
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love this thank you for your entry. be safe and have fun
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I appreciate the "Honor" and I'm glad you liked it... Keep your contests going.
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I will do my best to keep them goind.
As I have so much fun with thinking of new ones.
Riftkin
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