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CINCINNATI by efhjr.

CINCINNATI (c) Copyright 2007 by Earl F. Hubbard Jr.
(from A NEW ROAD/A YELLOW BUS BOOK of PEACE & LOVE coming for CHRISTMAS!)

We stayed in Cincinnati,
in a luxury hotel,
Mr. Howard shared the Penthouse,
with the children and Michelle.

Me? I went out clubbing,
with Saffron and Sweet Sue,
Sunshine Girl and Lily,
Fisher Cat and Cara Lou.

Cara learned to shake it,
on a beach in Malibu,
when she was in college,
at the age of twenty two.

Sunshine Girl and Lily,
did a silly Boogaloo,
that looked a lot like Elvis,
singing "BABY, DONT BE CRUEL!"

Vince was on a river,
in a Cherokee canoe,
with Pyper Rain and Dillon,
who saw a kangaroo.

Dillon was mistaken,
for it was a Caribou,
he wasn't in Australia,
as I danced with Cara Lou.

The last dance was with Saffron,
to WONDERFUL TONIGHT,
and to I'LL ALWAYS LOVE YOU,
as she held me OH SO TIGHT!

efhjr.

Author notes

This is the thirty first piece for what will be my 23rd book and the second book in my YELLOW BUS of PEACE & LOVE series of books of which I have 4 of planned - if all goes well. As with my LITTLE STAR books - my YELLOW BUS books are meant to be read from the first page to the last like the chapters of a novel.
ENJOY!
Peace & Love!
Earl.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 21, 2007

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    this is great as all of them are that you have been penning my dear friend. You sure have been busy with these and I am glad that you have.

    Riftkin

  • Lily otv
    November 20, 2007

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    Hey I've been practicing that silly Boogaloo for a long time to get it that perfect lol. Elvis would be proud of me. It's s first for me to stay in a luxury hotel though I think I may get to like it. I'm far more used to slumming it though it's often more fun in a tent or a bus. Lots of fun going on here in Cincinnati and I wonder how long we're staying!


  • moonbumps silver member
    November 20, 2007
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    I wished I'd been a gate-crasher-what fun you all be havin' on that dance floor!!!!


  • onesugar silver member
    November 20, 2007
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    Hi dudee, I can dance, take me next time OK. I did like being at the top of the hotel, all the lights at night like stars. Love Lilya xxx

    Hi matey, we had a look at the cinergy baseball ground and the childrens museum. WOW, everything looks so big.
    WICKED!! Stay cool. Love Dionte xxx

    Hi Earl this was brill, we went on a showboat on the river saw a Cincinnati pig, went around fountain square, can't believe how big everything looks just fantastic. Love mars bar xxx

  • CherryOnTop
    November 20, 2007
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    This is so lovely I enjoyed it so much.


  • sunshinegirl
    November 19, 2007

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    Earl,

    Oh my, what a time this is! And this trip is just amazing!!! And well, finally! I got to go dancing!! Yes!!! Thank you!!

    and love my friend

    Nyetta


  • onesugar silver member
    November 19, 2007

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    What a brilliant time we are having in Cincinnati, I would love the penthouse the views from there would be amazing, beautiful by day and magical with all the lights by night.
    you have painted a wonderful picture with your words PERFECT!
    Love you ~sugar~ xxx


  • Pyper Rain
    November 19, 2007

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    Sounds as if everyone had themselves quite a time in Cincinnati...as you surely do every where you go!! This was fun, I always think with each post...how will he top this one?? I am sure you will give it a go...

    Great time Earl...can't wait to see what comes next!!

    ~B.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 19, 2007

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    Elvis, have an impersonator friend Ryan Pelton, This is very nice we are travel south a bit cool. Canoe cool Me and Mark want to build a birch bark canoe, need to get to michigan for that. Learn to shake it in Malibu now thats funny. Great write to day enjoyed the trip.

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