I don't need presents
Wrapped with a bow
All I want is you
Underneath the mistletoe.
I don't need a stocking
Stuffed with bursting seams
All I want is you
A fulfillment of my dreams.
I don't need decorations
Covering a tree
All I want is to be
Just you and me.
I don't need tinsel
Or bright shiny lights
All I want is you
Warming my nights.
As I prepare a candlelit
Dinner for two
We celebrate this night as
I share my love with you.
As years go by and our love
Shines brightly like the sun
Know of all the beautiful gifts
You're my most cherished one.
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Presents: Quote, Color, Picture Inspired Contest! by Pixielated.
600 points, ended November 25, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Christmas is coming.... by islekine.
525 points, ended November 28, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - X-Mas!!! by leslielovesthomas.
300 points, ended December 24, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Beautiful
I love the rhyme, this sounds beautiful.Well done, lovely poem!
Lana
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A very good poem, it's nice to see so many poets rhyme.
Thank you for your entry, please join us in one of the other contests, if not all. Thanks again..Sue -
great job once again.
one of my favs of yours.
truly nice bro
-Yourpalbones
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Very nice!
Thanks for entering!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Lovely rhyme and lovelylight verse style of poem
It felt good to read felt good to hear and I think a lovely poem to share
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inmensely romantic
warms my frozen heart
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very sweet and beautiful
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Thank you for your entry. Your piece has a really sweet message. Well done.
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absolutely beautiful!
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Awwwwww!!!
I love it! It's soo sweet! : -
Awwwwwwww.
Geez, I'd love to have someone write something like that about me! Your work is charming and luring. I love it.
You really are Pure Romance. -
The romantic
And the words flow as the Season does with love and joy . Great job -
Wonderfully and beautifully done!
A lovely Christmas wish!
All the best! -
I liked this one. It has the romance, love, and feel for the holidays all wrapped in one little poem. You have done well with this one. Keep up the good work. Good luck in the contest.
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Also well said.
I like this,
And,
It always helps,
In good times as well as bad,
To have someone by your side.
Well written,
And,
Well done. -
Guilty (Everybody's guilty)
This is nice. But stuffed stockings are nice i like stockings...I reaaalllly like stockings
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This was a very cute Christmas poem,and very well written.keep it up.
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nice little christmas love poem. Thanks for entering my contest. Merry christmas and good luck!
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i like this
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that's so sweet!
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Great write
Soft ans sweet with a wonderful rhyme...Perfect gift for a loved one.. Good luck in the cntest
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Wow, such an exciting poem penned with two, I admire
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a very sweet and tender chrsitmas wish thats on the hearts and lips of so, so many of us. *smiles* I like this one a lot. Good writing, and keep the muse flowing.
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awesome
another awesome poem. i know h ow it is to just wanna spend christmas, or any holiday for that matter, with a special someone. you portray your wish here well!! i love your poems. theyre all so true to the heart and honest. you write things that so many people can relate to, and i think thats important.
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Sweet and Tender
Joel hun this is such a heart warming poem you've written that sure has come from the depths of your beautiful heart... you are gonna make your partner so happy and contended to stay by you through eternity... beatuiful flow of simple words to understand in well structured form that touches the reader's heart... Very beautifully done... I'm glad you changed your name for the previous name did no justice to you and your talen... thanks for sharing your beautiful inspiring thoughts... take care Minoo
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Nicley done my new friend, VERY NICELY DONE!
Blessings,
Terri Norris
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A nice collab from two clearly talented writers.
Well done to the both of you
Raker
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Oh this is sweet 
PureRomance fits you well.
Sigh.. This is beautiful.
Delila
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I know how you feel and I feel almost the same. You at least have a great chance of fulfillment. I really enjoyed reading this one.
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Wonderful, Beautiful
You have penned a beautiful love poem. It is filled with imagery. What a lovely Christmas Gift for your true love. Thanks for sending the link.
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All your writes are beautiful and romantic. Such a sensual feel to this one too. I love the last stanza again. You manage to incorporate so much of emotions in the end of the poem, which is a very good thing. Lovely and pretty write from your pen.
~Candy
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What a wonderful romantic holiday poem?
This is straight from the heart beautiful and I love it!!!
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wow
this is a great poem! Kind of early for me to think much. But i do like this one. Good job.
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This is so beaufiful
Once again you did an excellant work on this. Words in the right places and the person you wrote this for is one lucky lady. You do wear your name well and it suit you perfect. God bless you my freind.
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awesome
this is really beautiful i love it. it flows really well and my fave part is:
As years go by and our love
Shines brightly like the sun
Know of all the beautiful gifts
You're my most cherished one.
Good work from both of yas
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Great write, you have both done a fabtastic job. The flow is superb! Great thing to want for Christmas, hope you get your hearts desire
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definitely a sweet write.under the mistletoe, that does sound extra special.
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This is a beautiful collabaration... nice to see someone seeing the important side of christmas
Karen -
wow, this is very beautifully written. I enjoy poems like this, it's so much easier to understand. A women everywhere always wishes a guy would write a poem about them, so whoever she is, I hope the best for you.
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Very beautiful and heartfelt Joel!
I do hope that you get your Christmas
wish! Well done and keep up the wonderful
work here my friend. Thanks a lot for
sending this one my way!
Jeremy0826
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Awwww... Joel, any woman would be nuts if she didn't like this poem. This is something that every woman wants to hear from the fellow she loves.
Beautifully written. Keep that ink flowing, my friend. Love and hugs...
~Donna~
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Once again, great job. This is all I want for Christmas as well, but alas, my wishlist is long gone...... Keep up the good work guys.
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Ahh this is cute Nothing better than wanting that at christmas Great job with this write
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haha, this is great! what is better than to be with your true love on christmas? This really is great and made me smile. You are very talented. This held so much meaning to it...along with christmas cheer!Many blessings!
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