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Keep Holding On

I'm here to say,
Just look this way,
That I truly do care.

I wish you would all
Just stay back from that hole
Don't fall.

Take hold of my hand
Take hold of some crayons
Let it out through
Drawings and paint.

Smile a bit
Don't have a fit
I'm here to help.

Don't hold the knife
That'll just cause more strife
Instead come over here.

I'll read you a story
So you won't destroy
Your life.

Don't worry
I love you
I always will.

And so will your
Family,
Your pets and your
Bro,

Keep holding on
And don't let go.

Author notes

I hope I did a good job! Written in kind of a rhyming song format. I'm a kid.

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  • Argosalex
    November 23, 2007
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    Its great

    Will you put it on our group reading list! I love this poem!