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My God Is Alive


I Know My God is real and He is Alive
He moves the mighty wind and calms the Oceans Wide
He placed the twinkle in the Stars and gave the Moon it's Glow
He sent the dew drops to Earth to help the greenery Grow

He set the Sun high in the Sky, It's rays shine Everywhere
Glistening Sand along the shore, He placed there with great Care
Mountains with their snow white caps are beautiful to See
And there amidst the rocks, He made a stream to flow Free

The Heavens declare His Handiwork, and No Artist can Compare
The colors in the Rainbow, He made with Loving Care
The Hand of God is everywhere, Just open your eyes and See
The Blessings He has given to folks like you and Me

God Sent His only Son to Earth, To give us Life Anew
He came to dwell on Earth, His Father's Will to Do,
Listen to the Master as He softly calls to You
He'll Forgive you all your sins and be a Friend so True
9/23/2002

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This is a prewritten poem. I had to copy and paste it.

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  • Lady Mak
    November 19, 2007

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    This is beautiful

    A very beautiful inspirational write. I know my God is real and He is alive, conveys to me that through your experiances in life, you have certainly seen God as being very much alive and active in current events as God was in the days of Moses, God led his people, they were not left without leadership. Analysing the last line as asked, this God is a loving , forgiving God, and also a Friend who is true and always there through the good times and the bad. I think you have acheived your purpose of the poem, to bring glory to God which you have done in evey line of praise and appreciation. This wonderful peice of work really praises the Creator of heaven and earth, beatifully written you have acheived this well, this poem cannot in my opinion be improved any more than the excellent peice that it already is... kind thoughts and thank you for sharing your loving appreciative heartfelt write with me.


    • Katie Lazette
      November 20, 2007
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      Thank You

      Lady Mac for your kind comments on my poem. I am so very gald that you enjoyed reading it. May God Richly bless you and yours.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    November 19, 2007

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    Nice,

    A very inspirational poetic piece here sweet friend.
    Thanks for sharing, and it's nice reading you once again.
    All the best within the contest!

    Peace, Timothy


    • Katie Lazette
      November 19, 2007
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      Thanks Tim

      Your opinion is always appreciated. Glad you liked it.