He has bedroom eyes;
caring, sensitive, reflective eyes...
He holds my attention with his gaze
One smile
with fond glance;
my heart melts...
upon such moments,
there are no adequate words
He touches my heart in the most gentle of ways...
It takes a special person to listen to you in your time of need;
he's always been there
I know he will always be there...
Once in a lifetime, God sends special people who are "keepers";
he's truly a "keeper"...
this special man with those kind, gentle, sexy bedroom eyes
Author notes
Heavenly Angel
There are special people who come into your life; blessings from above...
I've been truly blessed in knowing Greg aka Bedroom Eyes
He's an inspiration to me; has been for a long time now just as he's a blessing to so many
A contest entry
- It's Time To Give by Celticmoon.
1050 points, ended December 9, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 46-50 ages enter your best prewrite Judged by RedwingSpirit.
750 points, ended January 18, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very Nice
First of all, allow me to give you the pleasure of introducing myself. My name is Adamastor. Anyway, I enjoyed this poem, and is well worth a 3. It would have been if you had just left out the word "Sexy" at the end. I will also tell you why.
The whole flow of the poem you have written here was smooth and kind, but became sudden and promiscuous at the end because of the end, so in the end, my score for your poem is 2. Please note, however, that I cannot ACTUALLY award this with a 2, because I'm a new member, so I can only afford to physically give you a one. Rest assured that Adamastor likes this poem, and IS worth 2, it's just the fact I don't have many points that's holding the score back.
Thank You and ejoy whatever is left of the weekend in your area.
Adamastor.
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Excellent and well formed. The "keeper" is an excellent play on words... I feel you found him to be a "keeper" instead of moving on and he is a "keeper" in that he protects and keeps you. Well done and fantastic piece!
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Beautiful! A wonderful expression. Nicely written. Congrats on 2 HMs. I find it very difficult to figure out how to fully express these types of feelings. You've done a very nice job!
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Wow this one is amazing , i like this sexy bedroom eyes !!!!!
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The words paint a very lovely picture and the emotions are fragrant and passionate and of course overbrimming with undying love.This is a glimpse of a love story that makes one sigh with longing and with emotions undefined.This was a very lovely read and reminded me of my love my sweetheart who has the kindest gaze like a caress and the most mischievious smile with dimples that lure .Thanks for sharingthis one it is special.Glad I clicked on this one.Please take care and always share...
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A very sweet tribute. Seems like a great inspiration.
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What a beautiful poem for the man you love. Good luck.
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so soft and so very poignant... the poem glides along as a gentle breeze on a slow sunny afternoon. and, oh, yes, it is highly romantical! Loved it a ton!!!
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what a wonderful commentary about the man you love! thank you so much for entering!
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I love how you started and finished this with his "bedroom eyes". It brings the poem full circle. It's beautiful, simple and sothing. Makes one feel at ease like their listening to someone chit chat while they lounge about. Terrific.
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Beautifully written ..and you are one Of God's Keepers Hugss Angel
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I have a keeper too and so I understand this write. Kindness and gentle understanding don't change with age as do muscles and hair...it means so much when you meet someone who is genuinely kind. thank you for entering
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Awesome
Another one of your "keepers", Awesome work Sandy, you "kick them out" at will, and each and every one touches your reader's hearts.
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One smile
with fond glance;
my heart melts...
upon such moments,
there are no adequate words
He's definately one lucky guy! I say you should keep the fella. He sounds pretty cool! Great job and good luck!
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Well
He is one lucky guy I would think. A keeper in both ways [ you & he ] I must say that I have always felt that there is that tenth women who looks beyong a mans looks & se his heart. Methinks you maybe be such a lady. Great write
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ITS GOOD
YOU HAVE A GOOD TALENT IN POEM WRITING GREAT JOB
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i Love it! Love is amazing!
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Very beautiful piece.
"One smile
with fond glance;
my heart melts...
upon such moments,
there are no adequate words"
Sounds like the real thing.
Good luck in the contest.
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This is just beautiful! We do just know who are the keepers don't we?....sighs...i can truly feel your love and it touches me
Thank you so much for sharing with me and for entering. It means a lot
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Great write
This is a beautiful piece, the words are so sincere. I hope he read this and I hope he knows what he means to you. True love is the best, thanks for sharing and keep writing. Be blessed. -
I love this. You've been blessed. I envy you.
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Excellent Write Dear congrats on the HM
Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest I wish you the best of luck
REDWINGSPIRIT
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Aw~ This is sweet, I love reading poems like this! The flow is good and I love the format. You made a very good point here... God sends special people who are "keepers" <<< I love that line. Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!
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Nicely fitting to the prompt and lovely dedication to the gentleman concerned, hope he appreciates! Good luck in the contest.
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mmm. yummy, I know for I too have such a man without whom i would be lost indeed! Your write is great!
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Sandy,
I could not have described Greg any more perfectly than your tender words have here. So true that there are those sent to us that are meant to be treasured for all they do for us. I to am honored and consider myself very fortunate to have met Greg. He is a wonderful man most deserving of such an honor as you have place him with here. I can also see that he was honored by your touching words Thank you for entering! Best of luck to you!
Blessings
Bel
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Sounds like you have a keeper alright. this poem is so beautiful and is a keeper, in my contest. If you didn't know i am in a relationship and I am looking for a poem, saying the words trapped in my mind, this fits it to a tee. Thank you for sharing, you have been added to the finalist list.
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Ahh I loved this poem! My favorite two lines were the first two lines of the poem.."caring, sensitive reflective eyes". It wasn't until I read these words that I thought about how a man who shows his soul, shows his heart. Just thought I'd share that with you, and tell you that I really loved this!
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Precious!!
Now this is one Precious piece You have penned Beautiful
Love the emotions that come from the Heart
Wonderful!!
Wooooooooooo Hoooooooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Talent Sweet Soul!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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like the saying goes it must be love.....
you do make a wonderful couple.....
and again Ithank you for the late November read as always.....
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So lucky to have friends like this and such a lovely tribute.
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I an honored by this piece you've written in my honor Sandy
These eyes have seen you through some tough times, but they have always looked at you with the gentle kindness that you so richly deserve.
I think you're a keeper too
Thank you Sweet one!!!!!
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WHAT A TENDER AND SWEET TRIBUTE!!!
It is these people we should hang onto and let their sincere honesty and beauty seep into our hearts and souls.
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aaaaaaawwwwww tis sweet to find true loves bliss with the romance comfort and peace it brings. A pleasure to have shared your piece, your heart and mind!
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I'm so happy for you, you found your dream, your blessing the one who makes your life worth it all.
I hope you let him read these beautiful words that you wrote for him. Just so you know, he is blessed to have you in his life also. Keep loving your bedroom eyes.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Beautiful sentiments expressed so lovingly, what a lovely thing for a friend to do. Love, C
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Wonderful
A well expressed and touching creation for the poet. Best of luck in the contest.
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This is so adorable...so beautiful....enjoyed reading your dedication to this guy...best of luck to you...smiles, Terry
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