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Life's hatred

I look upon a world of little faith
And disbelief begins to choke me
Chained to the cross of discouragement
As I pray for redemption in this life
Its time to oversee life's hatred
Force-feed them your ways of truth
And get rid of their corrupting lies
Its not time to lose all hope on humanity
Arson to all their heretical ways
Butcher the dark and make way for God's mercy

All your sins shall be absolved  

 

 

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  • Hinata
    August 12, 2008
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    short and really good.u write poems well!

  • saretyuiop
    July 22, 2008
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    Nice.


  • Snap.Crackle.Pop
    April 29, 2008
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    wow

    this is a great way to express how you feel! i loved this! great write.


  • Wall Door Salad
    March 7, 2008
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    this is really nice. a good way of expressing ur beliefs and the way u c things in a simple way


  • XxTearsHaveFallenxX
    January 11, 2008
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    wow

    that blow me away that was really nice to read i loved it .


  • -CrimsonTears-
    January 9, 2008
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    i like it...different..but i like it....your a good writer..keep it up


  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    January 4, 2008
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    interesting

    Interesting. Much better than Wanting You tho lol
    Rogue


  • Nemo Forevermore
    December 11, 2007
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    force-feed them your ways of truth...aye, i can relate to this...i love the irony in this peice!


  • Downloaded Love
    November 25, 2007

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    WOW

    That is really deep... and full of meaningand Imagery!!!
    I Love It


  • warrior-eagle
    November 22, 2007

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    From "Today's Poem" group

    We should make way for God's mercy so that He can cleanse our sins and teach us what it is that He wants us to learn and to become who He wants us to become.Great write.

    ...Simply Me♥


  • storiesuntold
    November 22, 2007

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    So true

    Its heart sickening how the human race has forgotten what human means . The world is so filled with evil and greed its everywhere today and then you hear them say how unhappy they are .Well I guess so for they never learned how to love or except love its so sad


  • brooklynngirl
    November 21, 2007

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    Very Good

    I love this poem. You used very vibrant words and I like that a lot. It has a touch of edge and yet it seems to fight for the light even though you incorperated darkness. Very well done.
    -Brooklynngirl


  • happy kitty kat
    November 20, 2007
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    nice! so true


  • cupcakecultx33
    November 20, 2007
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    Very excellent! This poem has so many truths!

    ~Jadeh♥

  • Pisces rainbow
    November 20, 2007

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    sad but true

    where do we begin to create change when ignorance is at thr reign, it is frustrating to live in world that is guided by the ego wonderful poem you are indeed an insightful artist.


  • Sir Love Coffin
    November 19, 2007

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    Deep

    I am very impressed by your work. Very insightful, Very deep meaning from within the hidden the hidden part of the soul. Excellent insightful thoughts of thinking. You are a true poet at the peak of being noised. Keep up the great excellent depth of compassion of writing. You are to be someday noised. It is shocking that there isn't more people reading your words of wisdom. I am adding you to my Favorites List. You should when you have time read some of mine. There as insightful as some of your poems.

    {Sir. Love Coffin}
    A.k.a. Seth


    • Lost Emo
      November 19, 2007
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      thxs again for your comment i'll add u 2 my faves and comment on your work soon its kinda early here now so i'm off 2 bed. thxs again


  • pain is strength
    November 19, 2007
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    this is really good... where did you get the idea??? i love it... keep up the good work..!!!!


    • Lost Emo
      November 19, 2007
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      thxs for the comment i kinda got the idea from the chat we had. hope u don't mind.


  • Emile
    November 19, 2007

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    good

    God's message is always love and fogginess not anger and hate. Words such as "butcher" and "heretical ways" makes me believe that you are so caught up in the big picture that you are overlooking the foundations of Gods work which is love which can not be forced upon people only offered to them..

    • Lost Emo
      November 19, 2007
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      i agree with you it can only be offered not force fed and thxs for your comment

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