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The Dance

Waking up to the soft morning light
Shining vividly, warmly thru the window
Across your slumbering face, the warm
Soft scent of rain lingering in the air,
Mingled with the scent of our love,
The taste of you still on my lips,
musky and sweet,
My sight filled with the vision of you,
 tangled in our Love worn sheets,
slight furrow on your brow
As you dream of our desire driven waltz, our ecstatic
Voices singing choir tune fine as we crescendo
In our passionate finale, together,
Our love completed and satiated, and as I
Reach out and brush the hair from your face,
You waken, sweet and warm as you reach for me,
While I smile, moving into your arms, and we
Encore the rhythmic steps and movements of
Our Dance~

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  • HpWICKEDangel
    November 19, 2007

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    the taglged ways of two bodies flowing, oh the graces of our voices rise.
    your words summon more than just love, but passion rekindled. thanks for sharing my fine worded friend.


    • MsWizard
      November 19, 2007
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      Thank you so much wicked...this is one of my favorite pieces and I appreciate that you like it as well~


  • Lord Merlynn
    November 19, 2007

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    This is classis right here, I really like this one a lot. May your muse never leave, for you are a gifted poetess. Good writing, and keep it up.