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The Wounded Angel

All friends dead and gone
With no one left to help
And no one around to care
Or so it was thought
For who now would help
That wounded Angel?
Left for dead at the river
By those once counted friends
The angels life not yet over
Hope; it seemed, was not lost
Found by believers and followers
Of the Ruler of us all
The angel was taken away;
Away to safety at last
Nursed back to health
Returned to full strength
All hope was not lost
Finally strong enough again
To fly away truly free
Toward the sun
And back towards home
That no longer wounded angel flew

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  • Great job! love this "Hope; it seemed, was not lost" loved this part what you did with the semi colon


  • moonbumps silver member
    November 20, 2007
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    A favourite subjectof mine Angels...loved this very much.x


  • Tarja
    November 20, 2007

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    I love it! Thank you so much for entering! This totally goes along with the video very well. Great job and good luck.


  • RainDripsBlood
    November 20, 2007
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    eyyy this was very very touching and cute

    -ur Rain gal


  • Abby In Chains. silver member
    November 19, 2007

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    a beautiful imaginative work of art, cookie budd. well done! as usual lol.

    always love your stuff.

    Abby


    • KnightOfTheRose gold member
      November 19, 2007
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      thank you and yeah sometimes on ap when I submit a poem for some reason it does it twice...



      -Steve-

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