My loins are on fire tonight
and I'm busting down the doors
of love with my big appetite.
Your lips looks so edible
that I want a bite.
Spread your wings and show
me that succulent kitty.
Purr! sweet thing as I stroke
my dick along your juicy clitty.
I love it when you stroke my clit
with your tongue.
Leaving me satisfy with moans
and tears of passion.
You licking and sucking until I cry
out from pure fucking ecstasy.
I’m pulling and grabbing the sheets,
damn baby how you going to do this shit to me.
I love it baby when you let that loin out,
knowing that the only thing that can full you up
is the essence of my juices as you lick it all up.
Oh yes baby you got me under your spell.
I would travel the deepest darkest parts of hell.
Just to have you sit on my face and
ride me into the night.
I love the scent of your pussy
its the ultimate delight.
Mmmmmmmmm baby yes right there
Your tongue seem to be reaching places
I never knew was there.
The feeling I'm receiving from your tongue
is driving me wild.
I grind my hips fucking your face
Riding until my body start to tremble.
Here it cum's baby the mother load.
I can feel your muscles clinching
as you start to explode.
Fucking shit baby it feels
like paradise.
We cuddle for a few moments
and then do it again alnight.
Author notes
This was a collaborative effort.
I would like to thank "Levesta" for her
explosive imagination and creative talents.
Baby you are all that and a bottle of Cristal.
A contest entry
- Erotica (Picture Prompt) by Beating.
450 points, ended December 1, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Am I wrong, or does this go back and forth from a womans perspective to a mans perspective? maybe I'm wrong, but there were places that got me confused.
Other than that, this was so hot! Very well describtion and thoughts! Great job! -
Hot Hotter Hottest....
The moon really gets you into something
doesn't he?????
Good luck in the contest
XXJeannette
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lol... are all ur poems erotic? geez last thing i need to b thinking of when my husbands inside lol. or r u just feeling particularly horny tonite? lol.
hugs,
feral,
xxx -
So you have been busy, huh?
Great Collabo...you two
Absolutely Marvelous
darell...Vee is my lil sis...better watch out, we come in packs
Get 'em Vee
Piff
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