Tied up tight for your evening pleasure,
Every inch bared in lustfull exposure.
Tasting heaven, your ultimate goal;
Hungry for sin, you take control.
Excitement brings wetness to thighs,
Ready to take the whip's painful cries.
Eager, leather bound on the floor;
Demanding your pleasure, down on all fours.
I'm at your command, I'll do as you please;
Now don't be gentle, I beg you, don't tease.
Each stroke, I'll take as a trophy in trust,
Caress my soul in your love and lust.
Speak not a word as you longingly play;
To cum on demand, only when you say.
Anticipation builds, each welt a new key,
Surged on the brink, I need the release.
Yes Master, I'm tethered in ecstasy.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Naughty Adults only. by Riftkin.
475 points, ended November 20, 2007, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow the temp in the room just made it to 105
or is it your poem!!!! I think the later!
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(Hoodwinked!) I see
why you took gold from Riftkin with this one! -
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Thanks again, appreciate it.
Storm
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a vivid picture indeed..
orders and consiquences...
truly a submissives dream!!
clear simple and exotic in the extreme!!
i love it...
trev
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tethered in ecstasy... DAMN! The title alone is titillating! Nice work. ~SoAp
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love this thank you for your entry. be safe and have fun
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don't tease?
but that's two thirds of the fun!!
i'm an unrepentant tease when i top. i never finish the job until she is begging for it.
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well done, you have certainly crafted a great poem here, it flows so great with such vivid pictures painted in the minds of the reader, great job, blessings John
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Oh the thoughts!
Naughty, but certainly nice. Glad I stopped by, this is just smokin'
Good luck hon.
Love ya-
Jay -
Whew! Smokin' and blowin' this is, girlfriend!
Wow!
Steamy, steamy, steamy
Loved the sensuality in this; you go, girl!
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