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Strumpet

Imagination. Think of
The possiblities
All the lies
You realize
Are here for you to seize

Flying horses. Magic
Carpets stumbling through air
All the lies
You realize
Are here for you to dare

Fat green trolls. Dancing
Gnolls surrounding them
All the lies
You realize
Are here for you to hem

Mithril armor. Halflings
Short and fat and round
All the lies
You realize
Are here for you to hound

Witch brooms. Carrying warlocks
Round and round the room
All the lies
You realize
Are here for you to doom

Stony golems. Staring at
Illusionary spectre
All the lies
You realize
Are here for you to vector

Seeping trusts. Witches, whores
Jealous and lying
All the lies
I realize
Are there to ruin me.

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  • EndlesslySheSaid
    November 26, 2007

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    Wow

    This is a mythical piece,
    Hehe, I like it a lot.
    Kepp up the good work.


  • November 20, 2007
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    nice poem....Asa


  • doyouloveit
    November 20, 2007

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    mythical indeed!! but yet there is another story intertwined here in this poem and you are a very clever writer always a pleasure to read you!!!


  • Misery into Melody
    November 19, 2007

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    awws

    this is soo mythical.
    i love it.
    hmm... wonder what it pertains to?
    *whistles*
    ps. i suck at comments :S