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Fate

I finally realize it as the truth.
Fate.
We are so bound to it, as a relative fact.
If I was to branch off, to do something different.
It would become analogous, discarding the digital.
Doomed to the fate of a different person.
The person I would become.
Looking back on my past decisions as they were-
The straight line, that led me to where I stand.

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Written October 22nd, 2003

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  • sare
    January 2, 2004
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    Yea I'm a great believer in fate. If something doesn't go right, than it obviously wasn't ever ment to be etc. Its a good write, quite complex like but well good.
    Sarah